Hey Asha Rae, thanks for sharing your video! I really liked listening to it. Just recently I have been playing the same song. 🙂
I think you did very well! One suggestion: I noticed you keep the fingers of your left hand away from the fingerboard. If you try to keep them above their spot it’s easier to find the notes and I think that will help you to play faster pieces in the future.
Good luck with your violin playing and keep enjoying! 🙂