Good tempo and posture! To make it sound more like it’s someone singing the song, you could add slurs so it’s not as… choppy? It’s really good for not having read sheet music for a while. =) I love this song too :3.
Keep up the great work. That’s really good for not reading sheet music regularly. I saw that the bow was curving on the strings rather than going straight up and down and that you have a Bow Right already. You may be bowing a bit too much from the shoulder and not enough from the elbow. Keep working on that and you’ll be fine. 🙂
This goes to show you how bad my high school music instructor was, but I have never heard of slurs before. I literally had to find a youtube video about it lol. Thank you for the comments. I really learned something new here and I will definitely give a shot!