Good performance overall! I would say the biggest things to work on would be to make sure you are using more bow with the quarter notes. It is easy to not do that during a performance, but eventually you will a fuller tone by extending your arm and getting to the tip. I thought your tone was still very good without doing this, so it will be even better when you start doing that!
I suggest watching the index drill which will show you how to rely more on the index to guide the bow and ease tension off of your arm. Especially pay attention to doing this drill at the tip of the bow.
Overall Grade – A-